How to Get Along with Others?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the Topic: How to Get Along with Others?. You should write at least 120 words, and remember to write your composition neatly.
【范文】
How to Get Along with Others?
How to get along with① others? I think the key is unselfishness—-I mean no matter what you do, when and where you are, you can not only think for yourself, but you also should take others into consideration②.
If you are a student, you need unselfishness when you get along with your classmates. For example, when somebody has failed in an exam, you should not laugh at③ her or him, you should think for her or him, for laughing may hurt her or his self-respect and destroy your friendship.
If you are a teacher, you need unselfishness, too. You should think for your students, don’t put too heavy burden on them, and don’t criticize them for their minor mistakes. If you don’t obey all these you should pick up the unselfishness as quickly as you can to maintain the balance between you and your students.
If you are a doctor, you should think for your patients.
If you are a member of a dormitory, you should think for other members.
If you are a manager, you should think for your clerks.
If you are ……
So in my opinion, if you get along with people with unselfishness, you will develop good friendship with them.
（唐 静 数学与统计学学院2003级）
【注释】
①get along with：与……相处
②take … into consideration：考虑到……
③laugh at：嘲笑……
【点评】
本文是一篇根据命题展开的说明性议论文，全文围绕“与人相处”这个中心展开。
在文章开头，作者就采用重复标题的方法直接点明主题，接着采用排比法If you are a student, If you are a teacher, If you are a doctor, If you are a member of a dormitory, If you are a manager, If you are ……从多个方面加以说明。而且，作者对第一点和第二点进行详细的说明和解释，让读者有一个充分的理解。由于篇幅已经达到要求，作者对其他几个方面就只是作了简单的列举。
综观全文，作者善于运用简单的词句和排比的修辞手法说明一个人们似懂非懂的道理，是一篇很值得大家学习的范文。
